Tuesday 26 August 2014

show not tell

Room 8 and I are learning to show the pitchers in our sentences not telling boring sentences like this.

The fox jumped over the fence.


Insist that boring here is  a better one.


The extraordinary brown fox jumped over a tall green fence.

try make this sentence.


Santa claws was late for charisma . Good luck. 











Tuesday 19 August 2014

student lead conference


Last night I had my student lead conference .
At first I felt scared and nervous.
My mum said her favorite part of learning was my kite poster for my calender art .
My dads favorite part was my pelican writing and my masquerade mask.
My sisters favorite part of learning was all of my maths. Mileka loved the fractions. Her favorite shape now is a cube. 
At the end of my conference I felt proud and extremely happy about myself.

  

Cross country

Room 8 and I are training for cross country.
 I can only do 2 or 3 laps a day.
 I go huff and puff just after 1 lap.
How many can you do? Jayden can do at least 5 or 6 laps of our field.
The whole school will be doing cross country at 29 of August.